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Jason Stephenson's avatar

Great story, the only issue is formatting. Need more actual paragraphs. single lines makes it feel like it goes on for every.

Patrick L. Parker's avatar

Whoa! That was remarkable! It rings of Stepford Wives and kept me unsettled the whole time. Hell, I’m still unsettled!

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